This is the third draft of my music video. have watched it and it htonk that some of the shots were too long but that can be fixed with different shots and more cuts.
My postitive feedback was the use of some Goodwins theory, narrative, split screens, cinematography. However i still got some negagtive feedback which was the lip syncing and the sliightly long shots which i had planned to cut. I will try and cut the footage even more to the beat and try and get the lip syncing even more accurately.